I really like this! It comes together very well. I like the line "exploding with adventure" and your last line reminded me of the common phrase "a picture worth a thousand words" or however it goes. But to sum it up with shooting stars, you stated "a picture worth a million wishes" I thought that was very well put. Good job! :)
I agree with clumsyclaudia- I lvoe how you changed around the common phrase to "a picture worth a million wishes", that is very clever. I also just agree with the overall poem- without the stars and mysteriousness of making a wish upon a star, what is the night sky? It wouldn't be much of anything worth looking at.
I really like this! It comes together very well. I like the line "exploding with adventure" and your last line reminded me of the common phrase "a picture worth a thousand words" or however it goes. But to sum it up with shooting stars, you stated "a picture worth a million wishes" I thought that was very well put. Good job! :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with clumsyclaudia- I lvoe how you changed around the common phrase to "a picture worth a million wishes", that is very clever. I also just agree with the overall poem- without the stars and mysteriousness of making a wish upon a star, what is the night sky? It wouldn't be much of anything worth looking at.
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